Really looking for feedback on this page! I messed up on some spots, so I decided to just try out a new method. I have always worried about characters getting lost in the background, so I tried placing an outline around each character. A good thing? Or did you like the other way better?

I’m going to draw the next few pages like this before deciding, but I would love your feedback! Also, incoming action scene!! Please bear with my first attempt at one of these…

P.S. You totally spell “apology” with two p’s XD whoops!