This time around I kept all the boring history to like less than one page. See! I am learning I swear!

Brother’s response is literally mine when I read the first chapter over again. I’m like, “How do you know all this stuff?! And why the heck are you wasting all my time telling me?!” Also Brother’s exclamation is there to help quell my own fears that I wasn’t just writing another Mr. Connors #2. Also also, what is up with Brother’s stance?? It’s like some weird interpretive dance 😛

Also I wanted to pull the lame “BONK stick” joke once more this chapter. Just like me, Joel is learning his lesson. Slowly, but surely.