What would you have done in if you were in Dayton’s position??

Another great fun fact, the “raging bear” was originally supposed to make an appearance in the story. I previously mentioned that when I started MitM I almost began roughly at the beginning of this chapter. It would have introduced Dayton as a character on the way to go fix Coy’s door, but would diverge as Coy is introduced to the reader by being chased by a bear. It definitely would have been much more livelier than what Chapter 1 turned out as, but I decided to focus on some more world and character building. Honestly if I went back I’d probably write it like that to help prevent the boring information overload that I feel the chapter became.

Wow. There have been a few times that I’ve made mention about the symmetry of a page before, but this one probably takes the cake as the most symmetric for sure. Also since the last page had so many “panel-less” panels, there are none this time around! >:D

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