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Alright, so this time I was late just to plain old procrastination…

The page was actually finished early today, but I didn’t get around to actually uploading it till now.

Anyways, what’s done is done. As for the comic itself, I really wanted to have a simple 9 panel layout for once. I feel like I’ve done this before, but I’d have to go back and check for sure. It’s pretty tempting to just go with this setup for pages since it can communicate a lot of info and be easily modified to have larger 3-panel long panels for mixing things up. After all, Watchmen did the 3×3 grid so well.

So…the joke for the bottom half of the page I actually wrote awhile back. Several months ago, I started a written side story set in the MitM universe (spoilers: It’s some backstory for the bandits). Originally the joke ended with “Well, someday you’ll get a chance to go read it…” because ideally I would have finished writing it. Well…that obviously happened >.< It's some needless backstory that doesn't really add anything to MitM's story, so I have no plans of deeply exploring it in the comic. However, to help make them deeper characters, I planned out a lot of their life story. I feel like it'll be good writing practice to still write those stories out, but with just words, not comics. It's been a decent challenge (that's part of the reason it's not done). Hopefully I'll finish it one day though. JUMP to page Page 137

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Chapter Six! Begin!! 😀

And you thought I wouldn’t get the page done this week. Ha!! Well I did! (and with only less than two hours left to the day…)

What a chapter starter. Not my favorite first page of a chapter mind you, but I was decently impressed with my (sorta) fish-eye lens panel. First try with a shot like that and I’d love to do it again. I still need to work on balancing my inking and graphite better though. This page feels like it suffers from that a little more than some others, but one can’t improve without making missteps along the way ^^;

Don’t tell anyone else, but technically I was still designing the bandits’ disguises midway through inking this page >.< Also kinda regret making the character with the longest hair have black hair. Sorry Mel, but when I use a softer, darker pencil in large areas it comes out looking really grainy unless I put some extra work into layering it with different pencil strengths... JUMP to page Page 136

Chapter 6

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It’s finally here!!! After one month off, Mutt in the Middle is back! 😀

…Well, almost back at least.

I’m gonna be gone on a business trip all next week, so I actually won’t be able to get the first page done for next week. I do, however, plan to finish it for the following week, I swear ^^;

I know what you’re thinking, “Really?! You changed the chapter cover again!!” Yes. Yes, I did. Literally the only headers that match each other are Chapter 1 & 2, and that’s only because they were both drawn in the same sitting (and those chapters don’t even match if you consider the original Chapter 1 header, page 10). Well I just tend to think of something new as each header comes along and I end up tweaking them. This time I wanted to accentuate parts of Dakota’s character design for a big, pinup quality. Yeah, his hair and jacket aren’t that long, nor his tail that fluffy, but it was fun to work with. Also, note to self: probably should make sure to mention Dakota’s actual name in this chapter (it’s only been mentioned in my comments and cast page).

This chapter’s a big one. I’m excited to see what happens (cause I didn’t get around to fully mapping out what’ll all happen exactly >.<). Here's hoping it goes off without any major hiccups!

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Wait a second…
That’s not a new character! (Although I suppose the five other coyotes around him are…)

Alright! Another chapter done!

This one was challenging and exciting (at least on my end). I finally got around to revealing Coy (er…Chance), practiced a lot with my art style, dived more into Janice and Ray, and hopefully setup the next chapter to keep the reader on the edge of their seat! Also, fun coincidence, but I ran out of plastic sleeves and paper in my binder exactly on this page. I can obviously buy more paper and sleeves, but I’m beginning to think I should get a new binder…

It turns out 140 pages will fill a one-inch binder up pretty good (and that’s with two papers slipped back-to-back in the same plastic sleeve!) :O

As much as I really, really want to dive right into this next chapter, I’m probably gonna take a short break from MitM (but not too long of a break, because then I’ll never come back to it) 🙁

This next chapter is going to be fairly important (spoilers!) and I really want to do it right. There’s a few other things that needs to get done as well. For one, I need to get Nicolas’s bio finished and added on the cast page (I’m done with his drawing, just need to write the info). Another thing that’s been on the back-burner for far too long is a side written story taking place in the MitM universe that I’d love to finish. And finally, I’m considering actually doing some marketing for MitM (because if you haven’t noticed, the MitM fanbase is kinda small) :\

I don’t have any serious plans, but at least something more than just a tweet whenever I post a page. I might get a banner together that I can use as an ad, and pay to get up on places like FA or the like. Of course, I can’t exactly do an awesome job of spreading the word by myself. So…this is my formal invitation to tell your friends about MitM! Help get the word around that there’s this lame webcomic called Mutt in the Middle that’s not exactly dying, but would truly appreciate the support. ^^

So until I return, stay here.
Like literally.
Never leave this page.
NEVER.
O_O

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I’m pretty sure “It’s complicated” has been my most used cop out so far. Whenever a character says that, it’s basically been code for, “Hey, this is important, but I’m gonna draw it out to a later time to resolve,” or occasionally it means, “Hey, I’m not done writing, so I’m not even sure what the answer is yet” xD

Bonus points to anyone who figured out where Nic previously showed up in the comic. I plan to more directly address him in the next chapter, so no worries if his brief, obscure appearance before this evaded you.

Tried implementing some more diagonal or non-rectangular panels on this page. It’s pretty tricky properly balancing the page once you start introducing different angles and shapes. On the other hand, the unique diagonals can create some impressive contrast and guide the reader’s eye if used appropriately. Even though there have been several different non-rectangle panels in this chapter, I’ve still kept my distance from one type of panel variation. The curved panel, or basically anything without straight borders. Why? Well I don’t hate them. Heck, I’ve seen them used exceptionally well in stuff like Habibi by Thompson with it’s elaborate shapes and curves that provide a unique dynamic. However, partially due to my more angular style, I’ve stayed away from it so far. Who knows though. Come an impressive fight scene or something else, I might try to work it in someway…

Also…
What’s this?? Another new character??!! :O

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Sorry about the missed week. Last week was murder…

Ah ha! So it is a new character! :O

Well…technically no. Mr Nicolas has actually been unofficially introduced before, just very briefly. Extra points to anyone who actually knows where he showed up before (but seriously, he looked a lot different and it really was brief so I doubt if anyone can point him out…) :\

So for this page, I just got bored drawing rectangles and squares for my panels, so I resorted to several slanted trapezoids xD

…I actually kinda like ’em.
Maybe I’ll use ’em more…

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Fridays sure seem like they’re gonna take on the duty of page updates…
Which is weird because my Fridays are actually normally packed :\

So now we’ve switched back to Janice and Sam. Scene changes almost always make me stop and think how to get it to work. Switching mid-page is pretty cool in my opinion, but is occasionally tricky to properly achieve. Changing settings between pages probably feels the most natural, but it’s often one of my biggest problems with webcomics. When a webcomic changes scenes between pages, I almost always go back a page to make sure I didn’t miss a page. Because of the usual “once-a-week” update schedule of a webcomic, it can cause a reader to forget stuff. A sudden redirection can cause even the most attentive readers to fill like they missed something. Ideally you would want to signal an approaching scene change by doing something (like a fade-away shot) on the previous page to help the reader guess what is coming on the next page (which I’m not entirely sure is something I did with page 131…)

If I was to start this page with Sam and Janice immediately talking outside the carpentry and then follow them inside, I feel like it would have been jarring. That’s primarily the reason there’s the top, silent, “establishing-shot” panel, followed by a panel without them. Only their voices are heard at the end of an almost finished conversation. I’m not saying this is a perfect scene change example, nor am I saying that my previous scene changes are flawless, but I do believe the way I try to structure most of them do some things right. Of course you’re the reader and the only worthy one to actually judge whether they’re successful or not…

Also normally a shot like the top panel would have the stone/cobble road that I normally draw my roads with, but considering the size of everything in that panel, I felt that it would just get too crowded and hard to read. The word bubbles were a little frustrating on this page as well. I had a rough time finding room for them or where to appropriately place them so they read fluidly >.< What kind of person only knocks once as one large “KNOCK”??? ...an unskilled artist who only leaves room for a single “knock” onomatopoeia word...stacked vertically -.- Wow. I sure had enough commentary for this page. This was for all of you fans out there who just couldn’t live without my rambling!! >:D
(A whole 0% of the readers is my guess)

And finally, is there a new character approaching?!?!

…meh, maybe.

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Sigh…maybe I should just go ahead and announce Fridays as the new update day…

And scene end! This chapter’s nearing it’s end (just a few more pages to go I swear!). This scene was a lot of fun, working with trees and outdoor settings as well as small wooden cabins again. Also really glad I finally got to show off Charlie…er, Caleb…uh no, I mean Coy, or Chance (GAH!!)

Also dang, Coy is short in those bottom three panels. If you’ve been reading MitM for awhile, then you probably have realized that consistent character heights and proportions are not one of my strong points (the key word there being “consistent”). They’re not awful by any means, but I’ve never really made a strong effort to record each character’s size and their height in relation to others. I just have these general rules of “he’s shorter than her,” “she’s got long arms,” etc. Maybe I should put some more work into that stuff…

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So…considering changing upload day…

Just started a new job and it looks like picking something else than Thursday might work better. But then again I just started, so I don’t really have a solid answer on what day will be better. Sorry, the next few weeks might be kind sporadic on updates ^^;

More testing on the shading side of things for this page. I actually really like the more subtle shading in the first three panels. The idea was to contrast the subtle shading with the over-the-top shading of the bottom panels, but I’m afraid the last two just became too complex…

The first panel used to have different dialogue, but I changed it at the last moment. Originally it was gonna be something more serious like Dayton saying, “I could have sworn I saw it glow,” followed by Chance mockingly answering “Sure, whatever.” But instead I came up with the what you see on the page, which made me chuckle. It was just so ridiculously cringe worthy with how hard it was trying to obviously foreshadow something that I thought it was amazing. I apologize ahead of time for my terrible sense of humor xD

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Late update this week ^^;

I’d like to say it took longer because of the “epicness” behind this page, but nah, it was just a busy week for me in the real world 😛

Looks like Chance’s boring little rock might have slightly more significance…

The terribly symmetrical page layout strikes once again! >:D
That’s three pages in a row! :O

It’s late here :[
I’m tired o_o
Can’t >:(
Make T.T
Cohesive >.< Complementary ;3 Commentary Dx JUMP to page >> Page 129