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So…considering changing upload day…

Just started a new job and it looks like picking something else than Thursday might work better. But then again I just started, so I don’t really have a solid answer on what day will be better. Sorry, the next few weeks might be kind sporadic on updates ^^;

More testing on the shading side of things for this page. I actually really like the more subtle shading in the first three panels. The idea was to contrast the subtle shading with the over-the-top shading of the bottom panels, but I’m afraid the last two just became too complex…

The first panel used to have different dialogue, but I changed it at the last moment. Originally it was gonna be something more serious like Dayton saying, “I could have sworn I saw it glow,” followed by Chance mockingly answering “Sure, whatever.” But instead I came up with the what you see on the page, which made me chuckle. It was just so ridiculously cringe worthy with how hard it was trying to obviously foreshadow something that I thought it was amazing. I apologize ahead of time for my terrible sense of humor xD

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Late update this week ^^;

I’d like to say it took longer because of the “epicness” behind this page, but nah, it was just a busy week for me in the real world 😛

Looks like Chance’s boring little rock might have slightly more significance…

The terribly symmetrical page layout strikes once again! >:D
That’s three pages in a row! :O

It’s late here :[
I’m tired o_o
Can’t >:(
Make T.T
Cohesive >.< Complementary ;3 Commentary Dx JUMP to page >> Page 129

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Another page accomplished! :3

Could Coy’s “crystal” hold any actual importance??? We will never know…
…well, until the next page comes along I suppose…or the next…or the next…or…

So I actually wasn’t impressed with my backgrounds on this page. Yeah, honestly I felt they were pretty bad, so I tried to use more texture in my pencil shading process to help things out.

I may have an unhealthy relationship with symmetrical page layouts. Last page was possibly the most symmetrical page I had made so far, and this one ain’t too far off either. I’m gonna have to do something really lopsided and asymmetrical before too long. Also for someone who likes to do different panel layouts, I sure seem to do the whole small-characters-panel-less panel on the bottom of the page a lot. Whether it’s the very first page, or only ten pages ago -.-;

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What would you have done in if you were in Dayton’s position??

Another great fun fact, the “raging bear” was originally supposed to make an appearance in the story. I previously mentioned that when I started MitM I almost began roughly at the beginning of this chapter. It would have introduced Dayton as a character on the way to go fix Coy’s door, but would diverge as Coy is introduced to the reader by being chased by a bear. It definitely would have been much more livelier than what Chapter 1 turned out as, but I decided to focus on some more world and character building. Honestly if I went back I’d probably write it like that to help prevent the boring information overload that I feel the chapter became.

Wow. There have been a few times that I’ve made mention about the symmetry of a page before, but this one probably takes the cake as the most symmetric for sure. Also since the last page had so many “panel-less” panels, there are none this time around! >:D

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Another week, another page 😛

This week’s page is (I feel) admittedly a little darker than most pages. Also used my first censored cuss word. That’s like junior high levels of edgy >:3

But seriously, I didn’t take long to just dash to pieces this pure, innocent image of this newly introduced young coyote boy. I mean, come on! He was literally just formally introduced on the previous page! Yeah, maybe you’re saying that Coy’s character has been tarnished in any way, but I’ve definitely placed him into a fairly unwelcome environment pretty quickly.

I really wanted to more firmly establish that there are races other than just the Red Wolves that are largely disliked. Sure, the distaste for Reds is much higher than Coyotes, but Coyotes aren’t exactly living the dream either. Also please bear with my idiotic idea of the term ‘yote. It’s something that I envisioned being slightly derogatory towards Coyotes, but now that I read it aloud it kinda just sounds stupid. Well, we’ll see if I ever use it again…

I could be wrong, but I think this is the page with the most “panel-less” panels. I normally don’t have more than one and occasionally two. While I was trying to think up something unique to do with these panels I had a very dull composition (that was extremely reminiscent of the recent page 124). Then I had the idea to just get rid of all the corner panels. I was left with the interesting “3” panel setup seen here. Well that’s just some useless ramblings from a comic creator though…

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I have returned! And a day early!! :O

I found the time to actually write the script for this page and roughly the next 5ish pages as well during my down time in the last two weeks. Since I had one of the more time consuming parts of making the page done, this page was finished quicker than I had expected. Well that and this page only had 6 panels so it flew by pretty quickly. Instead of waiting for tomorrow I decided to just go on and post it.

Sorry for teasing a character introduction on the last panel from the previous page. Waiting three weeks for a proper character intro ain’t terrible, but not exactly the best either ^^;

Also, HOLY CRAP! It only took 124 pages to finally show off the character talked about ON PAGE ONE >.< For a character whose name changed multiple times during development, his actual character design didn't change too- okay so it changed a good bit too. But Coy's hat and missing tail were decided upon fairly early on. Yes, I'm straight up mentioning that he has a bobbed tail just in case someone is wondering why it's not there. "Did you forget to draw his tail?!?!" No, although that wouldn't be the first time that has happened in this comic. I very deliberately have the back shot in the fourth panel to help clarify. More fun "behind the idea" stuff. Coy was originally written to be a little older. Not by much, but Coy would have been a little younger than what Dayton is in the comic, basically a young teen. At this stage in the writing Dayton was still gonna be a young adult (somewhere in the 20s) and Janice was actually gonna be his younger sibling. When I made Dayton closer to my age when I started the comic because I thought it might help me with writing his character, I also pushed Coy back a few years to keep the age gap between him and Dayton. So instead of a young adult and young teen, it became an older teen and a young kid. That doesn't really benefit you as the reader of MitM, but now you know :P JUMP to page >> Page 125

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CHANCE! or…er…Coy! or Charlie…or…you get it…
(Which reminds me I need to add him to the “Cast” page)

So, update on my end. I’m gonna be like super busy for the next few weeks (and not exactly have access to my scanner), so I will probably not post a page for the next two weeks. I will still try to draw a page or two in my free time, but no promises.

Anyways, hope you enjoy this page at least. Bye for now. Hope to be back as soon as possible ^^

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Alright! 1! 2! 3! Go!
(It’s gonna be a long time before the page number lines up so perfectly…)

Wow. Not much here. Just five panels.

B-But there’s some really cool trees! :3

Despite its slow pacing and not progressing the story, I felt this page was still important for at least a scene change if not also a little more insight into Dayton’s character.

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Phew. I did it. I wrapped up Sam and Janice’s talk in only three pages. O.O

Sigh…I just had to goof up Sam’s expression in the fourth panel though. No amount of post-editing could save it…

These last two pages have been drawn slightly different, from a process point of view at least. Normally I draw the boxes/panels, illustrate them, and then place text balloons over the drawings. These last two pages though I’ve drawn the word bubbles right after the paneling to help better place the illustrations and not have to worry about cramming the words in a more restricted space.

Not a particularly exciting “page commentary” today, but didn’t really have much to say about it, so I filled this time with boring behind-the-scenes info 😛

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HOLY DIALOGUE BATMAN!

Maybe it’s just me, but this page seemed like it had a lot of dialogue while I was drawing it. Part of this page’s lengthy dialogue is me still trying to test out my conversation skills between characters and trying to capture the odd quirks that occur in a casual exchange of words. Also I was surprised by how much I wanted to get said between Janice and Sam in this scene…

Fun side story, Charlie was the original name I had chosen for…uh…we’ll call him Coy for ease. Anyways during the preparation for this comic Coy’s name changed a ridiculous amount of times. Eventually I came up with this stupid idea to weave it into his character. 😛

Also since I’m in Pacific time, I’m just barely getting this update online on Thursday. Success!!

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