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Hey everyone! Long time no see……mostly my fault…

College is officially kicking me in the butt, but I have both fists up and fighting back >:D

Anyways, after a page of Dayton and Janice, we’re back to Ray and Chance. Yay, more world story… Don’t worry, I won’t go overboard like in Chapter 1. This is probably one of the only pages in this chapter about stuff like this. Also apparently Dayton’s feelings about Ray are shared in common X3

Fun time getting some more detailed panels in ^^

(and yes, I know the perspective on Mr. Connors’ chair in the bottom left panel is terrible >.<)

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Sorry about the late update this week everybody ^^;

There was a lot of writing and rewriting for this page. I struggled for quite a while on the dialogue and all the facial expressions, which I’m still kinda at odds with for some of the results…

Panel layout also took a bit of extra effort. I played with several designs before finally landing on this more ambiguous layout that kinda challenges the reader to pick a conversation to focus on. You can read the panels in β€œorder” jumping between each conversation with each panel, or follow the word bubbles and go through one conversation at a time.

Does it work? Heck, I don’t know, I’m asking you!

Well whatever the case, it was a lot of fun to try a new, edgy idea like this one out πŸ˜€

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Here we are; the finished product! So maybe this didn’t get done over the weekend, but I got it up for “optional-updates Tuesdays” (which I never use…)

It’s been a lot of fun writing out the dialogue and transitions for this conversation (including the next few coming pages). Having two conversations going on at the same time is difficult from a writing and artistic perspective.

I’m gonna try to keep the conversations related or mirrored in a way, so that it’s not completely unrelated and jumpy. We’ll just have see how it goes :\

Also more dark inside lighting. Yay. >:(

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Yet another new character!! This time we get to meet the father πŸ˜€

Fun fact: While Janice is one of the first character designs I did for this comic, Ray’s design wasn’t even tackled before I started this page! lol X3

There were a few tricky things to draw for this page (like hands, as always), but I was really satisfied with the final product.

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Well here is your formal introduction to Janice in case all of you really wanted it. Also apparently Mr. Connors is quite the Ladies’ Man ;3

He’s just trying to be gentlemanly…I think.

It’s kinda funny after the heavily “background-filled” panels from the last couple of pages, this page is almost entirely character based. It was a fun chance to try out some new expressions ^^