Ugh. I think I tried to say too much with this page…

I worked on several different scripts for how the dialogue would proceed on this page, and I had issues with each version. While I’m mostly content with this one, I still wish I left out the last line on this page. I feel like I should have just ended it with, “Uh, yeah…”

On a more positive note, I’m feeling more confident in my inking. Also if you honestly thought the inside of the carpentry would look just like it did 4 years ago on Page 1, you would be sorely mistaken 😛 My backgrounds have come a long way…

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